Hi Tony,

I wanted to tell you that I succeed in the IELTS exam and I got the required grade. Thank you very much Tony for your effort really you and Philp are the best.
I am very busy with my study while I will try to post some writing to you. I want to improve my reading also.

Thank you again and best luck to other.

Saeeda : )

Hi everyone!

Hey everyone,

Sorry I have not been able to post a comment for everyone regarding how I did in my exam, that is because I was sick.

Anyways, my exam went fine. The most section where I found most difficult was the reading. I simply did not do well, I guessed most of the answers in order not to leave any blank spaces. As for the other sections, they were easy. In writing I did my best and tried to avoid silly mistakes. I had enough time to go through my two essays and correct any mistakes I had made. Listening I must say was the easiest. I did really good in that section and I'm guessing I'll be getting a 7.5 at least!

I was really sleepy when it came to speaking. I did'nt know if I was able to speak! Eventually I did ... My topic was'nt that bad. It was about a favourite month or season. I simply made up so many things to say at that state and I never thought I could be so creative! I did great in speaking and kept talking on and on.....

At the end of the day, I was exhausted and glad I got it over with. Im sure I did just fine to get over the band I need to get. I wasnt that nervous, just the beginning.... It gets better and better as time passes by. I will mention my scores on the blog once I get them.

Lastly, I wanted to thank Tony for all the help through the course.... It was great information and I learnt alot ...
Thanks!!!
Mona..

So it goes ...

Well, it's almost time to start a new chapter. See how IELTS drains you and now you don't have that cloud hanging over you - just the results to wait for. Now you realise how amazing it was that the www.ieltsmagic.blogspot.com student, Mohammed Saeed managed to sit down and write up his IELTS test while it was still fresh in his memory. Mona has promised to do so as well, maybe her account will appear soon...

In the meantime, I salute you, ieltswatch blog students, for your keenness and support of the weblog. In due course, I shall notify you of the new IELTS course starting next Monday, 5 March. It will be three days a week over a four week period - that is the optimum arrangement for students (and tutors!). It will probably be a three day block - Monday/Tuesday/Wednesday. I'm sure someone will ask for a different combination, it's human nature to seek alternatives and you simply can't please all of the people all of the time, can you?

Those of you pursuing Master's degree programmes, I wish you every success. Drop in to our new weblogs and encourage the IELTS knowledge seekers to pursue their dreams.

I'm trying to get a former student, Sana' Rasheed, to post us a message about how the IELTS course gave her confidence to use English more effectively in her work as an architect and even inspired her to take up learning French! She saw that she can combine a demanding professional career with taking on the academic challenge of IELTS or learning a new foreign language. Bravo, Sana'! Let's hear from you...

This blog will inevitably become more quiet now. You will move on and in time give us news of your results and future plans. Then it will be the new course and a new weblog which will take centre stage.

Mutaz and Imad, we missed hearing from you! Maybe it is already too late for you to start blogging. You both and others IELTSing in March are most welcome to join the next blog - the February IELTS veterans are especially invited !

Stand by for news of the new weblog later this week.

Your comments, posts, news and views are always welcome!

Bye for now and good luck!

Your friend

Tony

Dear Tony,
I am so happy that the exam is over :-)
I think I did well in all the sections except reading! I was short of time although I did my best to keep track but somehow it did not work. I had to guess more questions than I usally did before. I got hooked on some questions which was a big mistake, but somehow I could not help it! I just did not do as well as I usally did when I practised by myself :-(
The writing tasks and listening were good and the best part was the speaking :-) I felt comfortable and did not have problems speaking about the topic given which was on films. It did not feel like I was being tested, it was more like speaking to a friend.
Overall, an unforgettable experience which I do not want to go through again! It was extremely tiering. I saw everyone there except Mouza.
The reading section of the exam really depressed me because I expected to handle it better than what I did. But it is done and over so all I can do now is pray for the best. I hope I get the score I require and I will be pleased.
I would like to thank you again for all the advice and support you have given me all through this course. It has been a great learning experience for me. I will definitely let you now my score when I get it on the 8th March.
Yours sincerely,
Maryam

Feedback on the exam

Dear Mr. Tony and all my classmates,

Yesterday was really a great day for me as I tried my best in the exam and I will let you know my score as soon as I receive it :)

The other thing, I followed your advice during the exam, for the listening I tried to be as careful as possible and to guess if I missed anything (which happened only once as I was day dreaming during the exam how awful of me :) ).
As for the reading I tried to time myself 20 minutes for each reading, and I think I did a good job in that area.
The writing was great I had two somehow easy tasks (from my point of view), I did as you told us and started with task two and I timed myself to finish within at least 40 minutes.
Finally, the speaking I was praying the whole time for a male examiner and my shock was that I was to be examined by a female examiner J but I spoke clearly and I hope that I did well, although I had a bad start as I was lost as to how start speaking about myself (can you believe it :) ).

That is all for now. Look forward to informing you about my results.

Take care everyone and wish you all a big success.

Yours sincerely,
Mouza

THANK YOU, BRITISH COUNCIL FOR ALL THE SUPPORT

Dear Tony & my dear friends,
Good Evening

By God's grace my IELTS exam was over yestreday. I saw Mona sisters and Ahmed.Including us there were near about 200 candidates for the same.

My listening and reading were not good ( I am afraid I can score 50% atleast)
Writing I managed as I got for 150 words - a letter to the Neighbour for throwing rubish near your house , task 2 I got " In villages small shops are closing & new super markets are opening , R U agreeing "
Alhamdalulla Speaking I got a nice Madam, She was so frienly to me & we made a friendly talk, I never feel that I was going through a Speaking Test.
First Question was, My name? Nationality, About India's Culture music & Dances in the past & now , What about new generation's Opinions about past culture , Leisure time in the past & present suitation in India & here, Where I am staying - Accommodation, why I prefer, like that

For two minutes talk, I got the subject What I will do in my Spare time, Some body will help like to do that that ( I prayed God to help me)
Dear Tony Hope my cake works, I cleary describe How I was making cake.

Rest everything I put in the hands of God and praying to get a nice score to me.What ever the feed back I will be satisfied with my bands

Once more thank you very much for BRITISH COUNCIL AND THE GUIDENCE AND CARE UNDER TUTOR MR. TONY .

REWARD IF COMMING FROM GOD. LET GREAT ALLAH'S BLESSINGS AND REWARD ALWAYS WITH U AS A GOOD TEACHER, AS A BROTHER AND AS A FRIEND

MINE AND MY FAMILY'S SINCERE THANKS TO YOU

FROM AN OBEDIENT & ALOVING STUDENT

WITH LOVE AND PRAYERS

REGI JAMES

Maryam's Midnight Message

Dear Friends,
A quick last minute note to wish everyone all the best for tomorrow's exam.
I hope it goes smoothly for everyone.
Good Luck!
Yours sincerely,
Maryam

Salma's last blast?

Salma posted this earlier this evening - she'd like some feedback. Make the most of this dear students, I'll be starting a new duty in my morning job next week, then a new IELTS course will be starting on 5 March. How fortunate you have been that I have had spare time in recent weeks and that my wife is a very understanding lady!

-Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


There are many differences between the male and female in their trends and interest in the life such as sports, social life, and education. These differences due to their physical structure which is make them different in many thanks. On of the differences shaped in studies trend. So I disagree with the opinion which says that the university should accept the equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.

I believe that study choice is different from male and female. Some studies is suits men more than women such as military studies. These types of studies attract men more than women. For instance, in UAE the majority of the men enroll in military studies more than women. On the other hand, the study type it is depends in the type of work in future. So working in military its difficult for women because it needs special skills such as the ability to work under difficult circumstances during the war and stay away from home for long time.

In addition, studying the aviation also its attract the men more than women. For many reasons women prefer not to study this kind of studies. Because of the conditions of working in this filed. Working as a aviator (pilot) required that the women must be single and this means if the women join this job she will lost when she married. On more thing lead the women not to choose an aviations study is the period of flights which let her be away for long time from home.


In summary, I think it is difficult for the universities to accept the same number of male and female in every subject, because the desire of students either male or female it is decide the number of students in each subject.

February 23, 2007 7:25 PM

-Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


There are many differences between males and females in their nature and interests in life such as sports, social life, and education. These differences are due to their physical characteristics which is make them different in so many aspects, one of which is their aptitude for academic study. In this essay I will discuss why I disagree with the opinion which says that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. {Same grammar mistake repeated 6 times - wrong use of "the" - it was featured in the essay title, Salma !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!}

I believe that one's choice of study is different from men and women. Some studies suit men more than women such as military studies. These types of studies attract men more than women. For instance, in the UAE significantly more men enroll in military studies compared to women. Working in the military is difficult for women because it needs special skills such as the ability to work under difficult conflict circumstances and staying away from home for long periods.

In addition, studying aviation also attracts men more than women. There are many reasons why women prefer not to study this kind of studies because of the conditions of working in this field. Working as a pilot requires that women must be single and unmarried. It also means that a female pilot would have to be away from home for a long time - this is unacceptable. {Hang on, the essay is about what to STUDY at university - NOT about equal opportunity at work}


In summary, I think it is impractical for universities to accept the same number of males and females in every subject. This is because it is the academic aspirations of students, either male or female, which decides the number of students in each subject.

February 23, 2007 9.45 PM

This essay is not acceptable. Your interpretation of the topic is narrow and not relevant. You do not personalise enough your argument related to male/female dynamics in the UAE society as a whole. You only have one idea/example per paragraph. Again you make the basic grammar mistake of wrongly using "the" many, many times. Your introduction and conclusion do not mesh. Your conclusion is inconclusive and unclear. Relax, take a Panadol or two and get an early night, Salma. Your previous essay on the media was of a higher standard.

Good night and sleep well, tomorrow will be very demanding.

Tony

Wishes for the blog

Dear all,

Congratulations.


Here is the 100 blog posting to you all.

May our blog live forever, and for it to do so do not forget to send a posting from time to time.

All the best.

Regards,
Mouza

Tomorrow is the big day :)

Dear Mr. Tony and all my classmates,

It has been a wonderful journey, in which I had the pleasure of meeting you all and tomorrow is my destination in the journey in which I will have to go and do the IELTS, so I pray to Allah the Almighty for success for me and for all of you and wish you all the best for the test.

So as Mr. Tony said an early night will be the most important thing to do in order to go to the exam, while we are relaxed, and do not forget all the things that he taught us which will be most useful.

So not to take more of you time, wish you all the best and may Allah grant you what you wish for.


Yours sincerely,
Mouza

Dear Tony,
Thank you for all the support and valuable advice that you have given me. I am definitely going to put all of them into practice. I feel ready and confident but at the same time nervous. I bought myself 2H pencils, so I'm all ready to write :-) Just a small incident, more of bad luck, I had yesterday! I hurt my left index finger and I started getting some pain today during writing since I am left handed :-( I hope it gets better till Saturday because this is the last thing I need, Lol :-)
Yours sincerely,
Maryam

Salma's last post?

Hi Tony,

Attached below is my new essay and I tried to apply your comments.
Waiting for your useful comments.

Regards,
Salma


-News editors decide what to broadcast on TV and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence their decisions?

The editors in Media establishments are responsible for editing every thing show through the TV or published in newspapers.

In my opinion, many factors play an important role in their decisions regarding what to broadcast or publish. I believe, that the editors influence by their surrounding environment and this will effect on their choices and decisions. There are three factors on my point of view influence their decisions.

First, personal factor which is play an important role, because the editor has his own opinions regarding many issues. Therefore, these opinions and believes will impact his decisions. For instant, if he interest in politics or economics he will focus in broadcasting or publishing topics about politics an economics issues.

Second, the social factor which makes the editor choose the issues related to his country as well as citizens. Such as discussing the relation between the parents and their children, the impact of using the intern in the relation between peoples, and the drugs effect in the country's future. For example, the TV in UAE focusing in social problems related to UAE society.

Third, politics factor which play the most important role in the editor decision. On the other hand, the editor will take in consideration the political system of the country. Because some countries put barriers in broadcasting and publishing political issues. So the editor will be careful on his decisions regarding any thing show or published on media. For example, in UAE the media don’t discuss the hottest issues such problems between countries because the UAE foreign policy is to have good relations with other countries as well as save the country.

In conclusion, there are many factors beside what mentioned above influences the editor's decisions because his role is to use the media in discussing the important issues which related to his society as well as to educate the people.

OK, then, this essay would merit an 'acceptable' level. It needed more variety in grammar and coherence. The conclusion was disappointing. Nevertheless, it representsa significant improvement on Salma's previous efforts.

News editors decide what to broadcast on TV and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence their decisions?

The editors in media establishments are responsible for editing everything shown on TV or published in newspapers. In my opinion, many factors play an important role in their decisions regarding what to broadcast or publish. I believe that the editors are influenced by their surrounding environment and this will affect their choices and decisions.

As I see it, there are three main factors that influence editorial decisions. First of all, there is the personal factor which plays an important role. This is because the editor has his own opinions regarding many issues. Therefore, these opinions and beliefs will impact his decisions. For instance, if he is interested in politics or economics, he will focus in broadcasting or publishing topics about political and economic issues.

Secondly, it is the social factor which makes the editor choose the issues related to his country as well as its citizens. For example, discussing the relations between parents and their children; the impact of using the Internet on human relationships, and the effect of drugs on a country's social fabric and future development. Take the role of television in the UAE as an indicator of the media's focus on social problems related to UAE society.

Finally there is the political factor which play the most important role in editorial decision making. In this regard, the editor will take into consideration the political system of the country. As some countries put barriers in broadcasting and publishing political issues, therefore the editor will be careful regarding his policy decisions as to what is to be shown or published. As an illustration, here in UAE the media do not discuss controversial issues such as problems between countries because the UAE foreign policy is to maintain good relations with other countries as well as to safeguard the country's interests and security.

In conclusion, this is a complex, multi-faceted issue regarding the limits of editorial responsibility to inform and educate the public. A host of factors come into play, not the least of which is the question of editorial freedom and the journalists' integrity to deal with the essential problems facing his society.

A fine essay, Salma. I had to re-write the conclusion because it 'said' nothing. You have listened to my past criticisms, thank you! I think the 'first' / 'second' / 'third' approach is a bit like you would do in Elementary school - I expect something more polished - especially as you seem to have already started your Master's programme.

Good luck tomorrow

Tony

BEST OF LUCK FOR 24TH EXAM

DEAR TONY & ALL MY FRIENDS

Good Afternoon,
As I am so busy , I will find some time to go through these blogs. I experenceing everybody's comments and advises.
My point of view 50-50 . 50% from my side & 50% from God's Grace.
So study and pray.

I got a last chance with LZ last saturday, but it was a flop,as there was exams going on. So I left early by 1.00PM.

Any way when I am getting time , Practicing with reading from the practice books and going through the references from BC.
Listing , as I kept in the hands of God and beliving he will do miracles

Sunday I will feed back to u about the exam

once more thank you very much for the guidence under Mr Tony & BC
BEST OF LUCK TO ALL
LET GREAT ALLAH BLESSU ALL TO GET THE SUFFECIENT SCORE /BAND U NEEDED.
WE CAN MEET IN SHERATON ON SATURDAY

WITH LOVE AND PRAYERS

MRS R. JAMES

Dear Tony,
Thank you for your kind words.
Mona and I have been going to the learning zone and have had no problems :-)
I did few reading exercises today at home. I still have a hard time with the "Not Given" part. It is so confusing and the other exercise I find difficult is matching headings with paragraphs. I can not do the reading practice on the computer in the LZ, it is extremely difficult to read and find answers without using highlighters.
Yours sincerely,
Maryam

Salma's Task 2 essay on parenting + Tony's Comments

Salma kindly wrote this essay and I re-print the original essay and my revised draft below:

34. Many people believe that women make better parents than men and this is why they have a greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answer.


In many societies they believe that the man is leader of the family and has the important role than the women, however, in other societies they have different opinion. They stressed that the women is play an vital role in family as well as the children and has a big influence in their life. In this essay I will discuss the different opinions the for and against the opinion which says that the women make better parents than men.

Some people think that the women are better parents than the men. They mentioned many reasons behind this opinion. One of the reasons are that the women spend more time with their children. However, that the time which the men spent it at home is less comparing with women's time. Because the men are responsible for offering the family the good life for their families. In this case, they worked as much as they can. On the other hand, some men work tow shifts or more and this lead to be away from home for long time such as more than 12 hours in worse cases. So the women take care of their children and played her role as a mother and father's role. For example, this case more obvious in many Arab countries such as Egypt especially if the man go to other countries to work. According to this the women will be responsible for all duties.

In contrary, some people believe that the men is better parents than women for many reasons. Such as the men is responsible about the family and he is the leader who guide the family. Also they stressed that men only them who has the right to take the decisions regarding the family issues. For example, if children need money or need to buy something they will go directly to their father. Because the know that he is the leader of the family so he has the money. Also from their point of view, they believe that the women cant take the men role in family because she is following the men and know what her role and his role.

In conclusion, I believe that the women are better parents than the men, because the women stayed long time with her children. In addition, this will give her the opportunity to be close to them and to share with them all types of day life. On the other hand, the children will notice this and that way we find the majority of children more close to their mother than father. For instance, I personally more close to my mother than father because when I was children my father used to travel a lot according to his work. So my mother take care of me while my father away.

(464 words)

February 20, 2007 9:18 PM

34. Many people believe that women make better parents than men and this is why they have a greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answer.


In many societies it is believed that the father is the leader of the family and has the more important role than the mother. However, in other societies people have different opinions. They stress that the woman plays a vital part in the family as well as raising the children. In this essay I will discuss the different opinions for and against the view which says that women make better parents than men.

Some people consider that the women are better parents than the men for a variety of reasons. One of the main explanations is that the women spend a significant amount of time with their children. However, that the time which the men spent at home is less compared to women's contact. This is because the men are responsible for offering the family the good life for their families. In this case, they work as much as they can. On the other hand, some men work two shifts or more and this leads to them being away from home for long periods such as more than twelve hours in the worst cases. So the woman takes care of the children and plays the role of mother and father. For example, this is clearly the case in many Arab countries such as Egypt especially if the man goes to work in other countries. Accordingly, the women will be responsible for all household duties.

In contrast, some people believe that the men are better parents than women on various grounds. One is that the men is responsible for the family and he is the leader who guides the family. Also they emphasize that only men them have the right to take the decisions regarding the family issues. For example, if children need money to buy something they will go directly to their father. This is because they know that he is the leader of the family and so he has the money. Also from the children's point of view they perceive that the women cannot take the men's role in the family because she follows the men and knows the difference between their respective roles.

In conclusion, I believe that the women are better parents than the men because the women stays constantly with her children. In addition, this enables her to be close to them and to share all aspects of daily life. At the same time, the children will notice this and that is why we find the majority of children are closer to their mother than father. For instance, I personally have more in common with my mother than my father because when I was young he used to travel a lot due to his work. So my mother take care of me in my father's absence.

(460 words)

Mistakes / amendments are in italics. One particular grammar mistake is left for Salma to correct bold red italic!!!.

Salma is a great believer in the 'for' and 'against' approach. I would like her to deal with ONE side of the question and give her personal experience as a daughter, wife (?) mother (?) to bolster her argument. IELTS wants you to refer to your life / society / culture / family. Otherwise it gets very general and rather bland - "people" "people" "people" - who are you referring to?

The essay is very long - this gives scope for more mistakes to catch the examiner's attention and leads to repetition. You must 'knock off' such an essay in 250 - 300 words in UNDER 40 minutes!

Good luck, Salma and all the other 24 Feb candidates, I'll be thinking of you!

Best regards

Tony

Good luck for Saturday...

Another week is in full swing... Saturday looms - the big day!

You've done all the hard work, scale down and read through your notes / my handouts / your corrected written work. Try to be fresh for that long, long day in four days' time!

In due course we might get some feedback on how the actual test went - do it while it is fresh (make a draft) and then post it when your results come out (10 days' time?). I know students prefer to see the outcome before they go public on the blog, but why not give us your quick, initial reaction then a more detailed analysis when you know your scores?

Looking forward, as ever, to hearing from you

Your tutor

Tony

Dear Tony,
Thank you for taking the time to read our essays. I greatly appreciate this. Your comments on my work encourages me and I do feel more confident. I can not wait for the exam on the 24th February to be over, it is on my mind the entire time.
Mona has gone to the Learning Zone right now but I wanted to do some work at home because I felt it is a little late to go there now. I like to spend at least 2 hours in the LZ.
I do not have any writing work at the moment to post but I will do as soon as I write a new one.
Yours sincerely,
Maryam

Hi Tony,

I completed the IELTS exam. “Alhamdallah” I did my best in speaking while I followed your guidance and I tried to avoid my common mistakes I made it in the past.

I wanted to thank the BC for their hard work and special thanks to my best teachers Philip and Tony. I will never ever forget both of you because each one of you assists me in his way and I will remember all techniques I learned from both of you.

Tony I could not take my certificate because no body was at the reception when I finished the speaking exam. So maybe tomorrow if I have time I will go.

I will keep in touch with you through the web log if it is ok with you. I will still post my writing tasks.

GOOD LUCK to all my colleagues in IELTS class on 24/2/2007.

Bye for Now

Argument essay topic + Tony's comments

See my comments below:
Hello everyone!
It has been a while that I have not posted on the weblog, therefore, I am going to type down one of the essays I wrote so Tony could have a look at it.

Topic: Are women better parents than men?

I am not a parent yet, but from my perspective, I do not think it is possible to say that women are better parents than men. Both men and women play an important role in their childrens lives. An absence of one parent makes a huge difference, therefore, responsibilities get harder. In the essay I will discuss why women and men both have to be good parents.

Certainly both women and men each have certain duties they have to follow. Basically, women are known for taking care of the house, and most of the time raising and supervising the children. Womens duty is not simple, and involes alot of awareness, positive actions towards the children, and lots of communication. We can not say that only women are better. It is a matter of performing the responsibilities the women can do and vice versa.

On the other hand, men also have the other part of their duty to handle. Men have to go to work, make money for the family. In consequence, that will mostly be the responsibility of the man. In my opinion, without the man in the family, the woman would have alot of difficulties and would not be able to cope up with everything. Men have a huge role to handle and it is not easy either.

In conclusion, therefore, women are not 'better' than men in parenting. It is a matter of acting positively and dealing with all the responsibilities fairly among them both. Clearly, the children will be brought up in a proper way, and would have respect and discipline between the family.

Topic: Are women better parents than men?

I am not a parent yet, but from my perspective, I do not think it is possible to say that women are better parents than men. Both men and women play an important role in their children's lives. An absence of one parent makes a huge difference, therefore, responsibilities get harder. In the essay I will discuss why women and men both have to be good parents.

Certainly both women and men each have certain duties they have to follow. Basically, women take care of the house, and most of the time raising and supervising the children. A mother's duty is not simple, and involves a lot of awareness, combined with positive actions towards the children, and lots of communication. We can not say that women have better parenting skills. It is a matter of performing the responsibilities either women or men can do.

On the other hand, fathers also have their duties. Men have to go to work and make money for the family. In consequence, that will be the man's responsibility. In my opinion, without the man in the family, the woman would have a lot of difficulties and would not be able to cope with everything. Men have a significant role to handle, which it is not easy either.

In conclusion, therefore, women are not 'better' than men in parenting. It is a matter of acting positively and dealing with all the responsibilities fairly and squarely. Clearly, the children will be brought up in a proper way, and would have respect and discipline between the family.

(259 words)

Maryam's Essay + Tony's comments

See my version below

Dear Tony,
Thank you for your comments on my last essay. I wrote another one on topic number 6.

The question is:
To what extent is the use of animals in scientific research acceptable?

Animals are used widely around the world by many organisations for research. Animal testing has become a routine practice by international companies for their product developments. In my opinion we do need to use animals for scientific research specially in the medical field. But the use of animals in research should not be carried out unnecessarily or be misused. I would like to use pharmaceutical and cosmetic companies as examples to justify my point why animals need not be used in scientific research unless it is of utmost importance.

The medical field has advanced to high levels due to many scientific research that are carried out by pharmaceutical companies. Many of these companies compete with eachother and therefore, try to always stay on top in the market by carrying out numerous tests on animals that provide the best subjects next to humans. These results are vital in development of medicine that is required for the cure of many diseases that are faced by doctors and people in society everyday. For example, animals used in scientific research has provided an enormous help in the development of medication for cancer and HIV patients.

On the other hand, there are many cosmetic companies that carry out their research on aimals unnecesarily. For example, I do not think it is important for products such as lipstick to be tested on animals. A lot of animals are sacrificed everyday for the development of ordinary cosmetic products, such as, moisturising creams. I personally prefer to shop from stores like the Body Shop that are against animal testing, which I find very appealing.

I would like to make the conclusion that animals should not be taken for granted. We should have respect for animal life and should not misuse the right to practice animal testing in scientific research. In my opinion, animals should only be used as experiments when they can be of utmost importance and can have an enormous affect on results and outcomes of research. The use of animals in scientific research is acceptable only when their use as experiment objects could provide valuable information to scientists, specially in the field of medicine, that could assist in finding cure to diseases.

To what extent is the use of animals in scientific research acceptable?

Animals are widely used around the world by many organisations for research. Animal testing has become a routine practice by international companies for their product developments. In my opinion we do need to use animals for scientific research specially in the medical field. However, the use of animals in research should not be carried out unnecessarily or be abused. I would like to use pharmaceutical and cosmetic companies as examples to justify my point why animals should not be used in scientific research unless it is of utmost importance.

The medical field has advanced to high levels due to much scientific research carried out by pharmaceutical companies. Many of these companies compete with each other and therefore, try to always stay on top in the market by doing numerous tests on animals that provide the best subjects next to humans. These results are vital in the development of medicine that is required to find cures for diseases currently being faced by doctors and society at large. For example, animals used in scientific research have proved an enormous help in the search for drugs to treat cancer and HIV patients.

On the other hand, there are many cosmetic companies that carry out their unnecessary research on animals. For instance, I do not think it is important for products such as lipstick to be tested on animals. A lot of animals are sacrificed every day to produce new cosmetic products, such as moisturising creams. I personally prefer to shop from stores such as the Body Shop that are against animal testing, as I strongly support this policy.

I would like to conclude that animals should not be taken for granted. We should have respect for animal life and should not exploit the right to practise animal testing in scientific research. In my opinion, animals should only be used for experiments when they can be of utmost importance and can have a profound effect on the results and outcomes of research. Using animals in scientific research is acceptable only when such experiments could provide valuable information to scientists, especially in the field of medicine, which could assist us in finding cures for diseases.

(360 words)

Re-post of Maryam's 27 Jan task 2 essay + Tony's comments

Hello everyone

Maryam kindly posted this essay last month, but unfortunately I did not have time to look at it in the hectic last week of the course. So, here is Maryam's text and my edited version below, blue / red italics are the corrections / improvements that I have made:

Saturday, January 27, 2007

Task 2 essay writing

Dear Tony,
I did an extra task 2 essay writing. I took the following question from the book Insight into IELTS:

The age of Information Technology has taken a lot of people by surprise. While it has become a way of life for some , others know very little about it and may be unlikely to learn. Eventually we will have have a polarised society and this will lead to serious social problems.

I agree that we will face a divided society as a result of Information Technology. Some people have excepted this technology with open arms and some have not. But I do not think that this will lead to any significant social issues.

I would like to use computers as an example to justify my belief. There are millions of people who have accepted this machine into their daily lives. Whereas there are equally the same number of people who do not appreciate this equipment and do not use it at all. And there are some who do not have the knowledge to work with a computer. It is usually the elderly people who fall in this category. They are not familiar with its working and therefore do not like using it. This is mostly because when they were growing up computers were not widely available to the public as they are now. They were only used by certain people mostly for research purposes. Computing was not even a subject at schools back then, therefore the generation before us grew up not learning about computers.

On the other hand, nowadays, majority of the population own a personal computer or a laptop were they can have access to Internet at all times. Information Technology has opened doors for many people and has made many things possible. People use computers together with Internet for all sorts of everyday activities from shopping to sending emails to people across the world in matter of seconds. It is also widely used at work place for many daily business activities. Many believe that their work has been made easier by the computer and that time can be saved and be put into other useful tasks. Whereas there are some who argue that many jobs have been lost because of the Information Technology.

I conclude, that ultimately we will have two groups of people, the ones who welcome Information Technology and appreciate its contribution to the society and others who are not so fond of it. But in my opinion I do not think that this divided society with their different views on the matter will face any serious social problems. I believe the older generation who are not so keen on this machine will always consider themselves old fashioned and will not make use of the advantages of this modern technology. On the other hand the younger generation will enjoy the era of Information Technology to its fullest.

Posted by Maryam at 10:12 PM

The age of Information Technology has taken a lot of people by surprise. While it has become a way of life for some , others know very little about it and may be unlikely to learn. Eventually we will have have a polarised society and this will lead to serious social problems.

I agree that we will face a divided society as a result of Information Technology. Some people have accepted this technology with open arms and others have not. In this essay I will argue that that this IT 'revolution' will not lead to any significant social divisions.

I would like to use computers as an example to justify my belief. There are millions of people who have embraced this machine as part of their daily lives. Whereas there are equally the same number of people who do not appreciate this equipment and do not use it at all. At the same time, there are those who do not have the knowledge to use a computer. It is usually the older generation who fall into this category. They are not familiar with its working and therefore do not like using it. This is mostly because when they were growing up computers were not as widely available to the public as they are now. They were only used by certain people mostly for research purposes. Computing was not even a subject at schools back then, therefore the generation before us grew up not familiar with computers.

On the other hand, nowadays, the majority of the population in the developed world own a personal computer or a laptop where they can have access to the Internet at all times. Information Technology has opened doors for many people and has made all kinds of applications possible. People use computers together with the Internet for all sorts of everyday activities from shopping to sending emails to people across the world in a matter of seconds. It is also widely used in the work place for many daily business activities. Many believe that their work has been made easier by the computer and that time can be saved and be put to other more useful tasks. Whereas there are some who argue that many jobs have been lost because of the Information Technology.

I conclude that ultimately we will have two groups of people, the ones who welcome Information Technology and appreciate its contribution to the society and those who are not so fond of it. But in my opinion I do not think that this creates a divided society with serious social problems. I am convinced that the older generation, who are not so keen on new technology, will always consider themselves old-fashioned and will not perhaps make enough use of the advantages of this modern technology. On the other hand, the younger generation will enjoy the era of Information Technology to its fullest.

A very sensible, balanced essay - well up to the 'good' standard that everyone is aiming for. Your writing improved still further in that last week of the course, Maryam. Your ideas are mature and well-thought out. You organise yourr essay in the classic four paragraph model. In this essay you needed to make your position even clearer in the introduction - I remember that you addressed this fault in your subsequent essays.

Super work and all the best for the 24th!

Best regards

Tony

16 February 2007 (better late than never!)

Hi Tony,

I tried my best to answer all questions but I do not know if my answers are right???

I saw Hanan she was so happy GOOD LUCK, you deserve it : )

Tony do you know that no body inform me that the speaking part been postponed until I enter the exam room one of the girls told me. I was really angry everybody knew expect me. I was going to complain at the BC then I said it is okay on Saturday so I can relax and practice for speaking.

I will still continue posting my writing tasks for IELS.

GOOD LUCK FOR THE OTHERS ON 25/2/2007.

By For Now

Dear Tony,
Thank you for looking at my writing tasks. I read your comments and as always they are extremely helpful. I will try to learn from the common mistakes that I make when writing.
The word "affect" is a verb - to have an influence on, whereas, the word "effect" is a noun- change caused by something/someone;result.
I remembered that there is another writing task 2 that I had posted on 27 Jan. I would greatly appreciate if you could look at that task too, that is whenever you have free time.
Yours sincerely,
Maryam

Dear Tony,
Thank you for your call and concern about me and others being able to use the Learning Zone. I will definitely stand my ground next time and refuse to leave the room :-)
I have done some writing tasks and will post it soon. I am trying to keep the same study routine as I had during the course.
Thank you again.
Yours sincerely,
Maryam

Hello dear friends
And a very special Hello to dear Tony
I finished the examination today at 2.40 pm, I did good in reading, writing, moderate in listening, and very very good in speaking. The examiner asked me about topics that I really like to talk about. I realised how much your advice was beneficial for me. I am pleased to know you and to be your student. Again thank you very much and be sure I will let you know about my score. Good luck for all my friends. Today I am going to celebrate Valantine's day !!!!

Er... Hello?

Hmmm

As I thought, you soon get so wrapped up in the 'duniya', don't you?

The blog is also for just saying "hello" and keeping in touch. Posting written work is great, but there is also the scope for encouraging each other.

So may I wish Saeeda and the other 15 Feb candidates all the very best of British luck! Let's hear from you!

Standing by for your comments / posts / news, views 'cos otherwise this blog is 'dead in the water'!

Tony

Task 2 technology essay + Tony's version 14 Feb

See my edited version below in italics, (blue font)

We live today in an electronic information age. It is easier to be connected by technology yet many people seem no closer to feeling happy in their lives. Discuss

In this essay I intend to discuss if it is easier to be connected by technology. Although, there are many people seem not happy for this.

There are many ways for being connected by technology, and they are email, messenger (chatting), VOIP, and e-communication (visual and audio). This Technology can be obviously noticed in develop countries such as Europe and America. But, it is not offered in undeveloped countries such as Africa.

There are some advantages and disadvantages for being connected by technology. First of all, the advantages are as follows. It allows us to be connected all around the world by Internet. Also, People will not feel lonely because they can keep in touch with others by using messenger and chatting rooms through internet. Moreover, it is value for business because they can make deals through e-communication (visual and audio). Finally, country which connected by technology its mark as developed country.

On other hand, there are several reasons for people seem no closer to feeling happy in their lives by using this technology. The most important disadvantage is reducing human interaction. Also, some people can not obtain having internet such as undeveloped countries mentioned earlier because their income is low. In addition, people have other commitment such as family, children and jobs they need to concentrate on them. Finally, security is an important issue for community to think about more than technology in some country.

Overall, I agree that it is good to be connected by technology because happiness depends on the person not in technology.
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We live today in an electronic information age. It is easier to be connected by technology yet many people seem no closer to feeling happy in their lives. Discuss.

It cannot be denied that modern communications technology has revolutionized our lives. The point is, has this made us happier with this easy contact? In this essay I intend to discuss why if it is easier to be connected by technology, the phenomenon exists that many people seem unhappy in their lives.

There are many ways for being connected by technology, such as email, messenger (chatting), VOIP, and e-communication (visual and audio). This technology is clearly evident in developed countries in Europe and America.

There are pros and cons regarding being connected by technology. The first advantage is that it allows us to be connected all around the world by the Internet. Also, people will not feel lonely because they can keep in touch with others by using messenger and Internet chat rooms. Moreover, it is vital for business because it enables deals through e-communication. Finally, a country which is connected by technology is defined as a developed country.

On the other hand, there are several reasons for people being discontent with their lives despite using this technology. The most important disadvantage is the reduced level of human interaction. Also, some people cannot access the Internet due to low standards of living. In addition, individuals have other commitments such as family and work. Finally, in certain countries personal security is a more important issue for communities to think about more than technology.

When it is all said and done, I affirm that it is beneficial to be connected by technology. However I believe that happiness comes from within and does not depend on technological tools. We should use technology to enhance our lives as we live in society – "No man is an island", said a famous poet, John Donne.

(289 words)

Task 2 population control essay + Tony's version 14 Feb

See my edited version (in italics, blue font) below:

Some governments say how many children a family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has trough taxes. It is sometimes necessary a right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree.

I will demonstrate why I think governments should control the number of children in a family. Also, I am going to focus on the necessities and rightness of a government to control population in this way.

In the beginning, I agree it is necessary to control the number of children in some countries for example China, India and Egypt. These countries have a high density of population and scarcity of natural recourses. The high density leads to diseases and poverty in these countries. Moreover, people will be less educated because no chance for everyone to be educated and crimes will appear and violence increase.

Government can have morally right to control the number of children in some circumstances such as the above mentioned countries. Sparsely of population will have great impact on several areas such as education, safety and healthiness. It is obviously noted that when there is less population people have more chance to go to school and colleges and less crime.

There are some methods of controlling the population and it is through taxes. People will think twice before planning to have a child in their family because this means they will pay taxes for that. When it comes to money issue and giving people are hesitate. Also family planning is another way of controlling the population by allocating more efforts in family education to minimize the family no more than two children in one family.

In conclusion, I am with controlling the number of children but in countries with high population density.
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Some governments say how many children a family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary a right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree?

The problem of over-population is a critical issue for governments all over the world. In this essay I will discuss why I think governments should control the number of children in a family. Also, I am going to focus on the necessities and justification for a government to control population in this way.

At the outset, I must state that I agree it is necessary to control the number of children in some countries for example China, India and Egypt. These countries have a high density of population and scarcity of natural resources. This high density leads to diseases and poverty in these countries. Moreover, people will be less educated because there will be insufficient opportunities for everyone to be educated and violent crime will become a feature of life.

Governments certainly have the moral right to control the number of children in some circumstances such as the above mentioned countries. Low population growth will have a great impact on several areas such as education, safety and health. It is obvious that when there is less population, people will have more chance to go to school and college. At the same time there will be less crime.

There are some methods of controlling the population, such as through taxes. People will think twice before planning to have a child in their family because this means they will pay taxes for that. Also family planning is another way of controlling the population by allocating more efforts to family education by limiting the family to no more than two children per family.

In conclusion, I am for controlling the number of children in countries with high population density. However, one needs to look at each country on a case-by-case basis. While some countries need to reduce their population growth, others need to increase their declining or under-developed number of citizens.

(308 words)

IELTS Practice Books from Al Mutanabbi Bookshop

Hello again!

Well, I spoke to my mate Mubarek at Mutanabbi Bookshop (in Medinat Zayed, behind HSBC main branch, telephone 02 6340319) and he confirmed that they have 6 copies of that Cambridge Grammar for IELTS + answers/audio CD. The reference is ISBN 0521 60462 1, the special discount price for Tony's students is AED 110. It looks really good for IELTS-related grammar exercises that also practise Reading, Listening and Writing.

While you are at it, there is the purple Cambridge Practice Book 5 + double audio CD ISBN 0521 67701 1 at AED 220 - after discount - they probably have Book 4 as well [we used practice Book 3 on the course].

Go for it! The apple of knowledge will not jump from the tree into your hand, so grab it and bite it! {I suppose it might fall off in the wind and you can eat it before it goes rotten!}

Tony 'Aristotle' Beale

TRUE STORY

Dear All


This is a true story from the Japanese Embassy in US..!!!



A few years ago, Prime Minister Mori was given some Basic English conversation training before he visits Washington and meets president Bill Clinton...



The instructor told Mori "Prime Minister, when you shake hand with President Clinton, please say 'how are you'. Then Mr. Clinton should say," I'm fine, and you?" Now you should say ' me too'. Afterwards we, translators, will do all the work for you."



It looks quite simple, but the truth is....When Mori met Clinton, he mistakenly said "Who Are You?" instead of "How are you". Mr. Clinton was a bit shocked but still managed to react with humor: "Well, I'm Hilary's husband, ha-ha...." Then Mori replied "Me too, ha-ha.."



Then there was a long silence in the meeting room....



REGARDS

REGI JAMES

What does the word 'sabbatical' mean?

I copied the definition from below site

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sabbatical

A sabbatical year is a prolonged hiatus, typically one year, in the career of an individual taken in order to fulfill some goal, e.g. writing a book or traveling extensively for research. Some universities and other institutional employers of scientists, physicians, and/or academics offer a paid sabbatical as an employee benefit. Some companies offer an unpaid sabbatical for people wanting to take career breaks.
Sabbaticals are often taken by professors, pastors, cartoonists (e.g. Gary Larson and Bill Watterson), musicians (e.g. Cindy Wilson, Bobby McFerrin) and sportsmen (e.g. Alain Prost).
In UK students' unions, particularly in higher education institutions, students can be elected to become sabbatical officers of their students' union, either taking a year out of their study (in the academic year following their election) or remaining at the institution for a year following completion of study. Sabbatical officers are usually provided with a living allowance or stipend.

Thanks, Saeeda! My 'sabbatical' will be more like a month (?) rather than a year - unfortunately the British Council don't pay me when I am not teaching!!!

Tony

I know it's hard, but . . .

Hello again!

So, you are free from my demands and torture sessions! All those freed-up hours that you were going to spend going over the handouts and posting on the weblog... Very good intentions, my dears...

Anyway, I'm enjoying the glorious weather and free evenings ... am going to see a live Shakespeare play (one of my favourites) "A Midsummer Night's Dream" at the British School tomorrow. Then number 3 daughter, Nadine arrives on Tuesday for a two week stay. This coincides with half term for Zeena, so there'll be lots of giggles and gaiety in the Beale household.

Despite all that, I will be listening and checking the weblog. It's your call now students, that Sunday-Wednesday discipline must not slacken. keep at it, use the Learning Zone, make study groups, post on the blog!

Good luck!

Tony

Saeeda's MBA task

Hi Tony,

I distributed questionnaires to 5 people (friends & colleagues at work) as the MBA teacher requested. Now I need to interpret my results and identify and discuss my strengths and opportunities for growth.

Below is the data I am going to use to write.

Key:
5= Strongly Agree
4=Agree
3=Neutral
2=Disagree
1=strongly disagree

Category
Articulate
Perceptive
Self-confident
Self-assured
Persistent
Determined
Trustworthy
Dependable
Friendly
Outgoing

I presented this data by using graph in EXCEL. Check your email I wanted to post the graph in web log but I do not know how??? Can you assist me sir.

Now I need to write it. (This is task 1 Tony : ) )
I am going to post my writing to my colleagues on web log.

I wanted to inform you that I am practising what you taught me on the IELTS course in my MBA lessons.

N.B. (Tony I am sending you the data in your email so when I will write my task 1 you can comments) this is for my study.

[See Tony's attached comment, what Saeeda is proposing does not exactly equate with IELTS Task 1 Writing Module Academic version. But feel free to post ANY written work on the weblog plus any information you come across that might help other IELTS candidates.]

Bye for now

Saeeda

The course is dead! Long live the blog!

Hello everyone!

Very pleasant final evening together, wasn't it? We missed you, Mouza, Saeeda and Reggie. [Saeeda - Mutaz took your reports/final handouts/precious pencil case + Mouza's stuff as well ---- Reggie, your envelope is behind Siham's counter - she's the Registrar on the left as you come in].

Now the build-up to next Thursday starts with a vengeance for the first victims - Saeeda/Hanan/Regi J (?). It would be fab if you all got together in the Learning Zone or even a spare room at the Council and did some group study... That road to hell is paved with good intentions!!!

The others, especially the 24 Feb crowd, be pro-active and help yourselves! Make study groups!

The end-March candidates, Mutaz and Imad, don't lose your edge!

A quick look at your course questionnaires (thank you,folks!) revealed:

• a massive 12 out of 13 preference for a four week / nine hour a week course breakdown. I will definitely pass this message to my line manager
• a feeling that Listening was neglected during the course [point taken and I will re-consider the balance for my next IELTS session - in March]. For the time being, why don't you analyse your disastrous performance in the Tuesday Listening by reading the INSIGHT transcript text (pages 171 -175) and see where you went wrong, given that I was marking very, very strictly
• one student would not recommend the BC IELTS course to a friend/colleague. This person was outstanding for their negativity and passivity during the course and I would recommend that such supine, feckless individuals go and feel sorry for themselves elsewhere. IELTS is for fighters, not excuse makers. Hmmm, you know who you are, if you even bother to read the weblog, let alone contribute anything to the weblog or the course itself that has just ended! Ouch!

It was fun. It's over in one sense. The fat lady hasn't sung yet. The first performance will be on 15 February, then 24 Feb and in March (?).

Now it's a different ball game. The ball is in YOUR court now, IELTSwatch community. I am here, at a distance, but now you have to take responsibility for your IELTS fate.

Good luck and God bless you all

Tony

Your tutor and friend (NB correct spelling: 'friend')

How was the experience, Miss M? A definite step in the right direction!

Dear Tony,
I just corrected the listening test that we did today and I got 35 out of 40!
I advise everybody to practise the listening in the learning zone it is of great help. I feel it has helped me alot plus your hand outs.
I am also feeling more comfortable with the writing tasks, thanks to the hand outs you are giving us and the writing that we do in class. It has been extremely helpful. I am very pleased with the band 7 that I have been getting in writing and hope that I will be able to do this well on the day of the IELTS exam. Inshallah!
Yours sincerely,
Maryam

Tuesday Test day in Room 8 - Don't be late!

Yes, I-Watchers, it's the BIG one!

Three full-scale IELTS practice tests in Room 8 under examination conditions:

• no dictionaries
• no talking
• no referring to handouts

The schedule is as follows:

7.20 - 8.20pm READING

8.25 - 9.05pm LISTENING

9.15 - 10.15pm WRITING

Please bring your INSIGHT into IELTS books! Kindly return any of the 10 National Geographic magazines that are in circulation.

Saeeda and Mouza please come - this is a very important session! Even if you come for the Listening and Writing, that would be better than missing another lesson.

It is not good to burn the candle at both ends.

See you all tomorrow, in good health, In Sha Allah, in Room 8 with your INSIGHT books.

Good luck, you have all been working so well - now let us put it all together in practice.

Bye for now

Tony

Writing task 2 + Tony's extremely belated 15 Feb comments - sorry Maryam!

Dear Tony,
I chose to write the first topic from the list of argument essay topics that you gave us. The question is:

In what ways has information technology changed work and working practices in the past 10 years?

Intoduction:

The birth of information technology has played a significant role in everyone's life in the past decade. It certainly has affected my way of work. I fully appreciate the invention of computers and how much they have simplified my work tasks. On the other hand , some people may argue that the computer has changed the working habits of people in a negative way. However, in this essay I will explain how, in my opinion, information technology has made people's everyday labour less tedious in so many different ways.

Conclusion:

I conclude that information technology has been positive in many ways. A lot of people have greatly benefited from computers. Information technology has assisted us in everyday work duties and has been a tremendous help in doing our tasks more rapidly and thereby has helped us to manage time more efficiently. It has improved all the vital aspects of working practices around the world, specially communication. Computers have made the world a smaller and a more reachable place for us to live in by making everything accessible at the touch of a button.

Yours sincerely,
Maryam

Very simple and elegant English, Maryam! Sorry about last week - I was so busy with end of course marking that I neglected this post! We'd love to hear from you and Mona in the build-up to 24 Feb.

What is the difference between 'effect' (verb) and 'affect' (verb)?

Tony

15 February 2007 (this is how I always write dates!)

writing task 1 + Tony's comments 15 Feb...

Dear Tony,

I did a writing task 1 from the Insight into IELTS book, page 77.

The diagram illustrates the water cycle process.

Ground water flows into lakes, rivers and seas. The water stored in the sea evaporates into invisible water vapour which is caused by the sun's heat. Clouds are formed when the vapour cools. In the meantime the wind moves the clouds and they cool even further which causes rain.

The transpiration from plants and trees also releases vapour into the sky which forms clouds too. And again when these clouds get cold, it causes rain. All the water gets carried downstream by rivers which flow into the sea. And so the cycle repeats itself. The diagram shows that evaporation takes place from stored water in lakes, rivers and seas. At the same time transpiration from plants and trees also contributes greatly to this cycle.

I can make the conclusion that the more trees and greenery we plant in our environment, the more rainfall we will have. Therefore, this can have a considerable effect on the water cycle and climate patterns.

Best Regards,
Maryam

Bravo, Maryam! I did not have the diagram in front of me, but you 'painted a picture' in words of this process. Try to analyse your SVA grammar mistakes. Other Academic IELTS candidates, bear in mind that you might well have to interpret a diagram which describes a scientific, technical or natural process. You follow the same formula of giving the descriptive facts in a selective manner and analyse the main trends / patterns. At the end you make an intelligent comment about the overall process a a whole.

In other words, be prepared for a diagram, not just a chart / graph or table!

Good luck, you all!

Tony

15 February 2007